Saturday, 23 March 2013

Lines without Rhymes


Moment comes in life when you don’t have music and rhymes but still the spirit of writing never dies..And then lines look perfect even without rhymes.... 






Roses are Red
Red is Wine
Moment I saw you
Forgot all lines
Lost all rhymes
Only option is left
Sing a song
Without music
Without rhymes
Something about you
Is special
Make me feel like this
Make me weak
Make me run
Make me to talk all bullshit
People do say
It happens in life
You get caught into
The feelings of love
And you write the lines
Without music
Without rhymes......




6 comments:

  1. I would repeat what I said earlier, 'Sometimes more than rhyme, feelings matter. When reading a poem, you swift from one line to another, the purpose of poetry is served.'

    Nice read. :)

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    1. Thanks Saru....Your appreciation always have been inspiration to write more and more... :)

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  2. U have gone into puberty phase.....poem shoem hayo rabba....:P

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  3. I told u..let it remain as it is..
    It's pure poetry with rhyme....

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