Moment comes in life when you don’t have music and rhymes but still the spirit
of writing never dies..And then lines look perfect even without rhymes....
Roses are
Red
Red is
Wine
Moment I
saw you
Forgot
all lines
Lost all
rhymes
Only
option is left
Sing a
song
Without
music
Without
rhymes
Something
about you
Is
special
Make me
feel like this
Make me
weak
Make me
run
Make me
to talk all bullshit
People do
say
It
happens in life
You get
caught into
The
feelings of love
And you
write the lines
Without
music
Without
rhymes......

I would repeat what I said earlier, 'Sometimes more than rhyme, feelings matter. When reading a poem, you swift from one line to another, the purpose of poetry is served.'
ReplyDeleteNice read. :)
Thanks Saru....Your appreciation always have been inspiration to write more and more... :)
DeleteU have gone into puberty phase.....poem shoem hayo rabba....:P
ReplyDelete;)...No Comments Bhai.....
Deleteawesm....m in wonder ye tune post ki h....
DeleteI told u..let it remain as it is..
ReplyDeleteIt's pure poetry with rhyme....